This week, students had the opportunity to choose their own
concept for their concept book. I revisited the list of concept book ideas we
generated as a class and added on more topics—we also talked about the kinds of
pages we would have for each topic. (For instance, when discussing a zoo animal
book, we named animals that would go into that book and students were
explicitly told how that book would look—with appropriate animals and
corresponding pictures and words on each page.) Students were then asked to
choose their own topic to write about—and they had to tell us the ideas that
would go in each page before they were given the pages to start. Most students
were able to come up with a concept and come up with a minimum of three
supporting ideas. Some students seem confused about their supporting ideas—for
instance, a student who wanted their book to be about “Thanksgiving” came up
with the ideas “macaroni and cheese, spaghetti and candy”, though these are
appropriate ideas for Thanksgiving—a more appropriate title could be “Food” or
better supporting ideas for “Thanksgiving” could be, “Turkey, pilgrims and a
ship”. Over the next few days, students were able to continuously check their
work—making sure to have a picture (about ONE idea) and corresponding text on
each page. Some of them also went back to their book to add more details/
words/ pages as we discussed in class.
An alternative read to my student’s products is in considering
their background knowledge. I need to be careful in my assessment of my
students’ work because it may not be that they do not understand “concept
books”—but rather the concept they are writing about. For instance, considering
the student who wrote about Thanksgiving—perhaps it’s not that she does not
understand that a book about Thanksgiving should have Thanksgiving ideas—but
she does not have enough background knowledge in considering what Thanksgiving
is about. Or that her experiences with Thanksgiving is different than mine, or
even that her five-year-old-self does not remember what Thanksgiving is about
besides the food!
I will continue to re-teach material throughout our read
alouds and reading time. I have created an anchor chart of “what to do when you
think you’re done” that I hope will help students as they become better
writers. The anchor chart tells students that they can add details to pictures,
words, pages, read to a partner, read to a teacher or start a new book when
they think they have finished.
If I were to teach this lesson again, I think a think-pair-share
would be a good thing to incorporate. Students having the opportunity to tell a
peer or discuss with a peer what their book is and their ideas can help them
better generate ideas and can give students practice thinking whether their and
their peers ideas’ make sense. Again, I think it is very important to expose
students to different kinds of literacies and genres so that students
understand the different purposes of writing. Making a concept book and going
back to add details is great practice for students as they become writers since
revisions are a natural part of writing.
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